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Here’s abit of background info before you read.
The characters have just seen each other at the beach.
The female character(Ty-Ohni) is in the water.Just been washed under and has lost and earring
The Male(Tate) Is on the sand
He had long wavy black hair that seemed to dance in the light breeze. His mysterious blue eyes immediately caught my attention, they stood out from his brown smooth skin. He turned back from his friend to see my staring immensely, I blushed. He smiled and I soon fell under his spell.
She had the most beautiful face I had ever laid eyes on. Black hair that draped gracefully across her back hugging her amazing figure and rich chocolate colored skin. Her eyes were also brown but more alluring than the rest of herself. I was told so much in those little seconds as I glanced at her eyes. Reviling all her secrets. I looked at her more intent and realized she was searching for something clutching at her ear lobe.
Oh my gosh! That was so awesome! It seemed like I was reading from a professional author! I love the way how you describe it. I actually want to read the rest of the book! You have great potential and I can tell you will be a great author and make a lot of money! 
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